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17th Oct 2019, 6:19 PM
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17th Oct 2019, 6:19 PM
dougwarner59
PAGE 7....IN LIVING COLOR !

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17th Oct 2019, 8:41 PM
Hey! color! great!

a few things though:

panel three, first balloon-
do you mean "...he revealed to me..."?

panel three, second balloon-
"and do you 'know' what makes..."

nice work! ;-D
17th Oct 2019, 9:09 PM
dougwarner59
oh yeah, thanks. good catch. I'll fix them right now.
17th Oct 2019, 11:59 PM
chris-tar
I love Equinox's suit. its different.
I wonder why his helmet looks so strange? Does it have something to do with augmenting his powers, or channeling his psychic or mental/telepathic abilities?
18th Oct 2019, 6:41 AM
dougwarner59
No there is nothing special about the helmet; It was supposed to be the same color as his outfit but I left it the way it is because I am too lazy to fix it. I am not sure it is even critical enough to fix.
18th Oct 2019, 3:54 PM
blue suit... red cape... hmm, a bit familiar, but...

eh... Superman's practically in public domain now.

and a big "P" on his chest and face and... (that came out all wrong)

;-)
18th Oct 2019, 6:36 PM
dougwarner59
He is kind of a superman clone. I wonder if anyone else has ripped off superman...no...it's probably just me.

pee on his face and chest, LOL; I may have a villain use that against him.
19th Oct 2019, 4:40 PM
Miaubol
The good guy who can't kill? ;)
19th Oct 2019, 10:40 PM
dougwarner59
who can NOW kill (because of what happened to him.)